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04/29/2005 02:54:25 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I'm glad I've got one of your images because I think you have a great potential =).
Composition: The tacks have a nice random order, with is interesting to the eye. I think this image would be a little more pleasing if you had a little larger crop to placed the central focus (the tacks) in a rule of thirds intersection. The background you've used is quite interesting too, though I wish it was more colored to true white then it is now. One idea: if you tried a lower angle shot, focused on one of the tacks and maximized the reflection there.
Technical: The first thing that shouts at me is image size. With the camera you have, cropping is not a problem for image size, even if the crop is a very small part of the original. I really like seeing images at the full size of 640 to see all the detail of the image. The image also seems a bit off color, and a tad dark.
Overall: I like the idea, I like the image, but I think with a little more practice/training it could be superb. |
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04/18/2005 10:17:57 PM |
| I love the sharpness and clarity of this shot. Also, the lighting and highlights are quite nice. |
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04/18/2005 03:50:31 PM |
| This photo seems much too dark, or perhaps a bit too high in contrast. Either way, the color of the tacks is almost lost. |
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04/16/2005 11:54:47 AM |
| I like the idea, but what gets me are the reflections. I'm always a sucker for a curved reflection! Nice! |
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04/16/2005 09:12:26 AM |
| There are no tacks in this image. ;) I like that used metallic tacks - the reflections are great. color is a bit off - I would expect the paper to be a little whiter. 7 |
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04/16/2005 02:01:31 AM |
| those are beautiful tacks, and I think you could have done a lot with them. as they are, the composition is confused, the image is too dark, and it's awfully small. a shame, really - (4) |
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04/16/2005 01:31:46 AM |
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