Lonely Strawberry
by rjpat

Comment by chesire:
Base: 5
Tech: +2
Subj:+1
Chln:

Total: 8

Lonely Strawberry
by rjpat

Comment by Bud:
Great lighting.

Lonely Strawberry
by rjpat

Comment by rlinn3:
I'm giving this a 5. It would have scored higher but there is no detail in the shadows and you have a few overexposed parts on the berry. A little more contrast and it would have really popped also. Great composition though.

Down at the Mall
by rjpat

Comment by Brad:
Good example.
Not sure if the color works here, and perhaps a good B&W conversion would add a lot, as does so often in architectural shots.

Back when getting a drink was work
by rjpat

Comment by kawhona:
Lighting is too washed out. Need to slightly underexpose to bring out the saturation and darken the subject.

Down at the Mall
by rjpat

Comment by GeneralE:
I like the contrast of the wavy lines in the upper-left with the central shaft below them.

Down at the Mall
by rjpat

Comment by Mr_Pants:
Plenty of lines leading in, although I find the subject to be a little uninvolving.

Down at the Mall
by rjpat

Comment by banmorn:
More of a vanishing point image than leading lines. The lines lead but not to a discernible subject...the Lines are the mall....hmmm...hope you understand and if you do perhaps you could explain it to me. Great angle and shadows and light dapples on the mall floor and really like the distorted reflections in the upper left.

Back when getting a drink was work
by rjpat

Comment by ajschel:
Nice subject, but uninteresting surroundings.

Back when getting a drink was work
by rjpat

Comment by Balko:
Some places still use pumps like this...