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| 04/26/2004 05:20:03 PM |
Forever Love was the last thing I was looking for...by KaveyComment by PaulMdx: Excellent lighting. I like the vertical gradient and the shadow on the right. I'm not sure if it's just my monitor, but on the LHS these seems to be a secondary shadow that's sort of disconnected form the right itself? I'm also not keen on the halo at the bottom-left of the ring - it makes the finish look somewhat harsh. The same seems to be in the top right.
I like the centrality of the composition, although I think I may have moved it slightly further right? I know it's centred with the shadow, but I think because it's reasonably pale it looks very slightly unbalanced.
I think the position of the rings is excellent - you get a good feel of depth. I think the shot is very slightly soft though?
I can see where you're coming from with serendipity, and as it's a particularly difficult challenge I think it meets the challenge.
For me the shot has a lot going for it, but I think it lacks that extra 'sheen' that would make it a top quality shot. |
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| 04/26/2004 05:12:46 PM |
Forever Love was the last thing I was looking for...by KaveyComment by frisca: i can see the link to the challenge topic quite easily..its not "pictured" but represented. I would have chosen a different coloured background. Something equally as simple and unobtrusive, but that gave more contrast to the subject. I like the placement of one ring in the other..suggests a connection between their owners.
There is a lack of sharpness overall (not major) that catches my attention, too. I like that we can read the inscription dates but the edges of the rings are not as sharp and clear as they could be--
overall: a challenge well met, and an elegant composition. |
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| 04/26/2004 02:53:36 PM |
Forever Love was the last thing I was looking for...by KaveyComment by BAMartin: The starkness of the photo contrasts nicely with the rings. I like that they are in the center of the frame, which makes the m the all-consuming center of attention. Unfortunately there are a few distracting reflections and a few tiny little burned out areas. Takeing photos of anything metalic is extremely difficult without specialized equipment, but over all a very nice job. |
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