Character
by okiesisi

Comment by JJWoolls:
I think if the man had a darker shirt it would help to seperate him from the background..

Character
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Comment by TooCool:
Nice shot but it's quite flat. Did you take this in the middle part of the day?
TC

Character
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Comment by MaryO:
Is someone about to get in trouble? I can't quite make out if his expression is angry or just contemplative. Wish the edhe of the railing weren't right infront of him, but it is a candid, after all.

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Comment by Zoomdak:
Well taken, but I doubt it'll score extremely well because it doesn't have a "wow factor" (something that makes the viewer go wow! (like if was a stop action shot of this splashing in a puddle). That being said, I like the simplicity of this shot.

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Comment by jonfrommk:
Nice shot of a grizzled old timer. maybe needs a bit of beefing up in terms of contrast but a good image

Why did the crane cross the waterfall?
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Comment by citymars:
I see many things that could use improvement. Mainly you need sharper focus on the bird. It would also help to have the bird facing the camera (waiting for those moments is part of photography). There is a "horizon" line of sorts dividing the photo in half -- it is generally considered poor composition to put your horizon at center. Hope these help!

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Comment by Elvis_L:
nice subject. i think a little more contrast would help the shot.

Why did the crane cross the waterfall?
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Comment by CassieDoodle:
focus is off

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Comment by Shadowi6:
Good BW but could use some more depth

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Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice and sharp but needs more punch in the black and white - The chain link fence is very distracting.