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| 06/20/2006 08:18:22 PM |
Indulge into happinessby DigiFotoBuddyComment by Dr.Confuser: Good concept. Nice setting. Well costumed. Focus is good. Lighting is okay, possibly a little flat. For me though, it might have had a much richer feeling in color rather than the sepia. |
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| 06/20/2006 06:18:42 AM |
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| 06/19/2006 01:57:10 PM |
Naturally Textured - Take IIby DigiFotoBuddyComment by alexgarcia: Hello from テメlex, CTP MkII
First Impression: wonderful texture
Composition: very nice simmetry
Subject: quite interesting shell
Technical: good focus, nice lighting (maybe a little dark on the upper left of the shell.
Improvement: the BG in red is a bit too strong, I prefer the black one
Summary: very good shot. It seems clear you move very well on the studio environment
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| 06/19/2006 01:48:17 PM |
Enlighteningby DigiFotoBuddyComment by alexgarcia: Hello from テメlex, CTP MkII
First Impression: very clever idea but IMO the realization could be improved
Composition: good, in this case the centered composition works well
Subject: very good concept for the challenge, with an original idea
Technical: the main flaw IMO is technical. If you had achieved a good silhouette, this shoot will deserved a very high score.
Improvement: a better lighting to make the silhouette more perfect
Summary: very intelligent idea.
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| 06/19/2006 01:11:31 PM |
City Architectureby DigiFotoBuddyComment by alexgarcia: Hello from テメlex, CTP MkII
First Impression: wonderful wide shot
Composition: good, like it
Subject: OK for me, but probably too wide for some people on this challenge. By wide I mean that some people, for comments I've seen in others shots, including mine was expecting more shots on details. But I think this shot is perfect for the challenge.
Technical: very good: great DOF, with everything in focus, very natural colors.
Improvement: I'm not sure if correcting the deformation in the perspective of the lateral buildings would help or not, just an idea...
Summary: Well done, maybe chicago deserves a visit...
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| 06/19/2006 04:32:54 AM |
Enlighteningby DigiFotoBuddyComment by blackenedwhite: CPTII
Actually, the shot looks better the longer you stare at it.
It was a great idea, albeit not very obvious e.g. the low DNMC scores.
The subject was, honestly, still a bit too dark. A 30-second expsure with a 1-second exposure for the light would've looked better, I think.
Just a suggestion, though. |
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| 06/19/2006 04:22:10 AM |
City Architectureby DigiFotoBuddyComment by blackenedwhite: CPTII, oi!
Dude, this one's more of a cityscape than an architecture entry.
That isn't to say that it doesn't meet the challenge, though. Actually, it does. Quite deviated from the norm, however.
I quite like the buildings in the BG (OMG the subjects's the BG hehe) and the general feel of the whole thing borders on melancholia.
Nice work, Shailesh. |
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| 06/19/2006 04:12:13 AM |
Selfby DigiFotoBuddyComment by blackenedwhite: CPTdos, ayos!
Not very creative or gimmicky, but still a well-done SP. The red background hurts my eyes and you would've been more guapo without it.
Flash-lit? A diffuser in front of that white light source would help, IMO. |
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| 06/19/2006 04:08:08 AM |
Strawberry Bananaby DigiFotoBuddyComment by blackenedwhite: CPTtoo, only later!
OKay, I'll keep it short:
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Nice subject -- or subjects, rather. The subtle vibrancy of the colours do take the cake for this particular shot. The choice of BG's not really that great, but works nonetheless,
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The shallow DOF was very detrimental as I bet a lot of people took of points for it. It was very distracting and compositionally unhelpful. A deeper DOF would've worked better.
The shadows under the banana don't help as well. A diffuser in front of the light, or maybe a repositioning, would've lessened (or eliminated) said shadows.
Good luck on next challenges! |
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| 06/19/2006 03:59:27 AM |
C.H.I.C.A.G.O.by DigiFotoBuddyComment by blackenedwhite: CPTII, oi!
Wow, nice cityscape. Flip it horizontally and you'd've got "DPC" on them lights.;p
The colours are amazing, the exposure dead on, but it's the sharpness (or un-sharpness, rather) that hurt your shot, placing it where it is now. So mebbe a little more sharpening next time. |
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