Love Scorned
by togtog

Comment by tcherring:
CRITIQUE CLUB

Okay, I have sat here for 5 minutes now, and I just honestly love this picture. Great lighting, wonderful subject, so original, and very fun to look at.

Your aperture, shutter, etc were great, and it looks like your score did fairly well. I personally think it should have been a bit higher.

As far as changes - maybe brighten it up a bit, and show more of the pencil. Also, if you look at where the broken pencil is, it did not just complete a line. By placing it at the end of a line or sketch, it would look a bit more realistic.

Overall a great shot, very original, and well done!

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by Gordon:
Maybe try a vertical/ portrait framing?

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by Kavey:
Simple yet strangely appealing.
7, Kavey

Love Scorned
by togtog

Comment by emorgan49:
I love this - wish the pencil had been sharper

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by PTLParsons:
Would never have thought of this. So simple yet so right on. Love the texture that comes thru so clearly. Can't fault you on this one. Not exciting but right on photographicly.

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by casualguy:
It sure fits the theme!

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by justine:
Great humor, good work, good luck.

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by briphoto:
Yeah, it's a good thing they have those lines on the road.

The Line Between Us
by togtog

Comment by ChrisW123:
Good idea, but should have shot a more interesting group of yellow road lines. Nice idea!

Love Scorned
by togtog

Comment by kandyj:
Nice photo, original idea, well shot.