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------- x ------- X ------- x -------by glad2badadComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this feels just a touch off-balance to me. I think more of a diagonal OR more negative space on the right would make it feel more balanced. Also, having the barb further towards the bottom of the frame would make it feel more stable, I think -- right now it is almost centered and it seems to make it feel static.
Technically, I really like the shallow dof in this. It accentuates the barb and textures nicely. Also, the mottled background gives an interesting almost-smooth contrast to the sharpness of wire. The colors are also really good.
Overall, you have definitely met the challenge. Despite what it probably sounds like, I really like it. It has an almost abstract quality that it intriguing. Good work.
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