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Comment by rex:
Looks too green

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Comment by vadvirag:
I don't really like the colour tones here, somewhat it reminds me to a failed WB setup, or, if it was the purpose, it dowsn't really give me the Matrix feeling. I would change your composition as well, for example a diagonal one with the keyboard, which divides your photo to two equal parts, one for old and one for new. I would choose a lower angle as well, approaching from the side of the pen. The idea is nice but could be implemented with a higher quality.

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Comment by LevT:
is the yellowish tint on purpose? If so, I don't quite see it.

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Comment by joro:
At first I thought you should show more of the keyboard, but then I realized that you knew what you were doing. :) (The keyboard would have dominated the pen if more of it was shown). I suppose there could be a hidden (or intentional?) meaning in choosing to show only the "ctrl" key--contrasting the modern "control" or rigidity vs. the "messiness" of prior times. Or maybe I'm reading too much into it...

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Comment by digitalknight:
great idea, too much white space for my taste. The green cast I don't like - but maybe you were going for that. nice creative though, I really like the idea

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Comment by mpalitang:
The shot is all great, but the color is off... it's very yellow.

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Comment by The_Itinerant:
So you're saying that fountain pen users have a lack of 'ctrl' over the ink? I think using a keyboard of a different color than the background would make it more distinguishable. Otherwise, good picture.

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Comment by grandmarginal:
Would have been great with the white balance adjusted.

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Comment by PaulinaRD:
I would not have had put the pen next to the keybord