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dpdunneComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Since you did not offer any photographer's comments when asking for a detailed critique, I can only offer my critique based upon personal opinion, rather than your actual intent.
I am assuming that your intent was to take a creative photo of cheese. By looking at the challenge, cheese on a mousetrap might have been creative, however, not very original.
The mouse hole appears to be VERY small in relation to the traps and the cheese, and actually looks like it was drawn onto the wall rather than being a hole IN the wall. If it's an actual hole, then I think maybe different lighting would have helped to inhance the appearance of depth in the hole.
The photo is very clean. nice focus, no clutter, and nice arrangement. The shadows on the other hand, kind of decrease that cleanliness. It creates enough distractions that it almost seems busy.
Focus and clarity are ok. I like the detail that we get in the cheese.
The background works nicely as well. Nice color in the upper 1/2, seperated by a nice diagonal line with a darker lower 1/2. Works nicely.
Overall a fun photo, which could benefit from different lighting to reduce shadows. ~Heather~
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