Night Train Over Wells Street Bridge
by milo655321

Comment by srdanz:
Should have been rotated left a bit.../6

Discovery: View From Inside the Gorilla Pen
by milo655321

Comment by Toniann220:
awwww

It's 38 degrees Fahrenheit, it's raining and I'm not wearing a coat.
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Comment by graphicfunk:
Interesting composition with great b/w tones. Bumping up on humor factor.

It's 38 degrees Fahrenheit, it's raining and I'm not wearing a coat.
by milo655321

Comment by Coley:
neg space works here nice contrast

Night Train Over Wells Street Bridge
by milo655321

Comment by HOOlovesdrums:
are the skyscrapers leaning or is it just me? I like the train as a blur though

It's 38 degrees Fahrenheit, it's raining and I'm not wearing a coat.
by milo655321

Comment by srbrubaker:
Very funny.

Night Train Over Wells Street Bridge
by milo655321

Comment by hossam:
good job

It's 38 degrees Fahrenheit, it's raining and I'm not wearing a coat.
by milo655321

Comment by alien2thisworld:
Composition: 7, Excellent creative composition.
Technical: 5
Appeal: 6, I like your expression and title
Challenge: 7, Shows character for sure :)
Overall Calculated Average Score: 6

Night Train Over Wells Street Bridge
by milo655321

Comment by Mr_Pants:
There are a couple of streaks of light in the water (the diagonal ones) that spoil the lines a bit, I feel.

It's 38 degrees Fahrenheit, it's raining and I'm not wearing a coat.
by milo655321

Comment by Skip:
i don't know anything about portraiture, so i'm using your image to try to figure out what i think i would or wouldn't do in this situation, as well as what i notice and get out of your image.

this image speaks volumes, even without the title. if the art of portraiture is to capture the essence of a person, i believe you have succeeded. you seem to see yourself as a smaller part of the world around you, where you would rather capture the mundane and make it interesting than focus on yourself. this has an almost ok-i-did-what-you-asked-can-we-get-back-to-work-now feel to it. this is something that is so hard to do, to be able to draw the personality out of anything. the composition and ranges are great, and the expression is perfect. this is a nice, solid effort, and i hope it does well for you!