Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by pcody:
nice lighting and good tones.

Rhythm of the City
by milo655321

Comment by nsbca7:
I love the way you have isolated the subject from the midst of the crowd. I think that perhaps it reflects his own isolation from society.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by Mal37:
Needs contrast. Might also be improved if the subject was interacting with something else in the image.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by alfresco:
Nice lighting. Good profile shot of the model, I like her expression. The texture of the water is nice offset to the model. Excellent crop, focus, and dof. Very well done.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by RedOak:
Seems more like a couple's fun snapshot rather then anything relating to the art of Nude work. 5

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by marvin:
To middle positioned for my taste.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by docpjv:
oh the appeal of water... great pic..

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by taterbug:
Good idea. Nice pose. I like the look on the subjects face. I am not a real stickler for having to use the rule of thirds, but in this case, I do find the centered composition to be a little weak. Perhaps a tighter crop could strengthen the presentation.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by mesmeraj:
Have you used this model before? I swear she looks familiar. Althought this is a nice setup, in landscape orientation it appers a little "snapshot-ish". I think in portrait you may have bbeen able to conquer this problem. Imagine the photo having been taken at so that she sits in the bottom right cornver and the water streches out of the frame, with that eautifl stream of light against the water.

Mermaid
by milo655321

Comment by rlinn3:
Well done technically, but boring compositionally. 6.