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tmhallingComment by Kemptonreporter: First off, let me tell you that I love your narrow dof.
Let me also warn you that there are those among us who won't.
Tough cookies for them.
Narrow dof is what allows us to paint with colours and shapes, because non-essentail things within the bounds of the shot become reduced to abstract colours and shapes when we throw them out of focus.
Your colours and lighting are all good for me.
And the placing of the bag lends nice visual interplay between itself, the row of lights, and the open door(?) in the far distance.
What detracts from this photo, however, is all those off centre lines and angles.
And unfortunately I can't get past looking at them.
Better luck next time.
Tough cookies, I tell you!