Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.

This is the type of image I like, one that makes you think. I wonder about the story behind the girl, and why she is holding stars. I can't put my finger on it, but I feel like there is something holding this back from being an amazing photograph. Perhaps having more shadows on the subjects outfit would make give this image more depth. Perhaps having some variation in light in the background would bring this to life. The more I look at it, I think the bow in her right hand is a little distracting as it overlaps the stars and takes our attention away from them. If you cropped tighter to frame just the woman holding the stars, you might have a stronger image. Great shot. Keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

To be or not to be!!
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 5 or 6.

My first impression is that I like the balanced composition, and overall dark colours. I'm not sure the hair style adds to the photograph, but it doesn't take away from it either. You finished with a decent score, but I think that there were other photographs in the challenge that better demonstrated "fill flash". So while you did have a fill flash shooting up at the model, the overall feel of the photograph is that of fairly balanced lighting. To increase your score, I think a more dramatic light source might be needed. Keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by bvlindalou:
your stars make me smile

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by photokariangel:
hmm, thats an interesting take. at first i was just all, "what the crap: but the more i look at it, and the more i think about it, the more i like the concept you portrayed. Awesome job. hope this does veyr well for you.

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by bvy:
That's really bizarre.

Frosted flower
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by seasaw:
that must have been one heck of an ice storm - nicely done...

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by kingskingdom:
nice take on the theme

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by Connor:
lol great shot

Frosted flower
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by Connor:
wow, great shot, love it

Frosted flower
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by franktheyank:
interesting shot