Little Strobist
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by hotpasta:
very cute kid...full of wonder

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by hotpasta:
I like the image overall, just don't get the title, but maybe that's just me

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by Dr.Confuser:
Technically superb image, surreal in its own way.

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by bauerfan71:
Very soft and emotive.

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by ButterflyGirl:
different...but I like it

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by mgsmith53:
The message or statement, with the title, is very unclear.

Discourage
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by bmartuch:
This fits in well with the dark background.

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 6.

This is the type of image I like, one that makes you think. I wonder about the story behind the girl, and why she is holding stars. I can't put my finger on it, but I feel like there is something holding this back from being an amazing photograph. Perhaps having more shadows on the subjects outfit would make give this image more depth. Perhaps having some variation in light in the background would bring this to life. The more I look at it, I think the bow in her right hand is a little distracting as it overlaps the stars and takes our attention away from them. If you cropped tighter to frame just the woman holding the stars, you might have a stronger image. Great shot. Keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

To be or not to be!!
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 5 or 6.

My first impression is that I like the balanced composition, and overall dark colours. I'm not sure the hair style adds to the photograph, but it doesn't take away from it either. You finished with a decent score, but I think that there were other photographs in the challenge that better demonstrated "fill flash". So while you did have a fill flash shooting up at the model, the overall feel of the photograph is that of fairly balanced lighting. To increase your score, I think a more dramatic light source might be needed. Keep up the good work.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

Playing the stars.
by AmeedEl-Ghoul

Comment by bvlindalou:
your stars make me smile