Babes Magnet Wunderbike by
AmeedEl-GhoulComment by snaffles: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial Impression: very good conceptual shot but falls short in some areas, most already pointed out by commenters. And you are dicing with death by inventing an acronym to go with the BMW. I worked as a copywriter in advertising, and you unless the client is launching a brand extentsion, you NEVER, ever, ever mess with their brand name! Everyone knows BMW is a primo product. No need to invent an acronym to support it.
Technical: the lighting is quite good, composition is acceptable car ad 3/4 front shot. You did a lot of pp, which means your pp is way better than mine - but remember you must have a good shot to work with in the first place! This is a good shot, but could be better.
Artistic: Shot cluttered by the trees. Eliminate the trees and white thingys and shot would be much stronger. Hood of car too dark, maybe try a strobe on the left. I have to agree that too much light on hubcaps. Show more car, less hubcap.
Overall: A very good effort but needs work (see above)
If you have any questions feel free to PM me,
Susan
Remember what I've always said: if at least 50% of your commenters say the same basic thing about your shot, they're probably right!
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