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by HillWalk

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background4,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing5,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool

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by HillWalk

Comment by mcmurma:
the color is great, looks like it was shot at dawn. and the tabletop looks wet, though it may well just be the texture in the glass. The chair in the foreground on the right distracts me though, and I wish the pencil had a more starring role in the shot. (5) ~mcmurma

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Comment by HBunch:
Very nice angle. I like how you have done this with the chair in front. Sometimes this doesn't work, but it works nicely in this case. Now, I know the table is textured, but I think it also has water on it too. I would have stopped at the fact that the table was textured, if not for the 2 little water droplets on the chair. I was trying to figure out why the pencil was a bit distorted looking and I came to the conclusion that it is either because of the texture, or added water, or both. The grass looks really neat through the glass on the table. The lighting is great for portraying that "forgotten" look. It's dim light, but definately not too dim. Great shot and good luck in the challenge.

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Comment by jmsetzler:
I'm not really sure how to go about commenting on this photo. I like the mood.. It reminds me of one of those afternoon thunderstorms and how the sun comes out afterwards... - jmsetzler

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Comment by solarmax:
Could have been better quality, good idea though.

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Comment by RedRuthann:
GREAT Job with this - brings out sadness. I like how the sun light is just barely highlighting the tip of the pencil. Really nice. 9
Ruthann

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Comment by Kavey:
I like this, though actually like the abstract you'd get if you cropped in on the pencil and the glass, although it wouldnt show that it was a table out in the garden, I just love the texture of the glass with the green in it. I don't like the fat vertical of the chair.
5, Kavey

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Comment by normw:
I hate to say it Hill, but this one is really good. I have decided to give you a 1.......I mean a 10

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Comment by waltoml:
Nice picture. Lighting is good. Focus is ok. Subject matter is ok.

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Comment by rjhawkin:
too dark