Memories
by atsxus

Comment by bananashay:
I'm confused about what the grey shape is in the upper right. The picture also seems a little dark overall.

Memories
by atsxus

Comment by SNAP1:
Good set up, just need more fill to bring out the detail in the shadows a bit more

Hudson Lights
by atsxus

Comment by kevrobertson:
good shot.
9 from me.
the boat on the left slightly draws the eyes from an otherwise flawless photograph.
Good luck

kev

Hudson Lights
by atsxus

Comment by leaf:
ok shot, not sure what to improve, but it doens't hold impact for me. Perhaps more negative space at the top. It is a very busy image.

Memories
by atsxus

Comment by whatdewuc:
Thought provoking and nicely composed shot. Our memories of the old school days are strong when paging through the past. Love the old arizona sweatshirt and the lighting of her shoulder and face.

Hudson Lights
by atsxus

Comment by frumoaznicul:
Beautiful colors and reflection, verry well executed, but compositionally probably a bit boreing. I think you maybe could find a better angle.

Blue Eyed Girl
by atsxus

Comment by faidoi:
The desat of all colors except for the blue brings the viewers eyes to attention. I don't know if this is the true color of the eyes or not. Upping the satuaration of the blue while desaturating the rest of the colors will make it more vibrant and stand out even more.

I wonder what this would look like if the eyeliner's(?)color was left in. I bet it would look cool. Kind of like those makeup ads.

Stubborn!
by atsxus

Comment by dsidwell:
Nice expression here, and the lighting adds strength to her. Dividing her in half, though weakens her, in my view. She is only half there, so only half as strong. The negative space invites doubt as to her stubbornness. Still, nice piercing gaze.

Stubborn!
by atsxus

Comment by peecee:
Nicely done.

Stubborn!
by atsxus

Comment by graphicfunk:
returning for comments
Very good charater study and very well done. bumping up.