sha tte r ed time
by saintaugust

Comment by nordic:
This is great, but I do think the backgroud detracts a liile.

slow escape
by saintaugust

Comment by alliebeal:
This is one of my favorites. I like the distortions and the gloomy rainy day feel. Good luck!

slow escape
by saintaugust

Comment by ScotArt5:
I like how you went black and white. But the whole picture doesn't hold much interest. At least for me.

slow escape
by saintaugust

Comment by dallasdux:
The image of the walker is blurred thus giving them two heads. A faster shutter may have avoided this.

intruder
by saintaugust

Comment by love:
Nice comp.. 6

intruder
by saintaugust

Comment by heathen:
very nice detail here...nice lines and patterns...good light to work with

sha tte r ed time
by saintaugust

Comment by srbrubaker:
Or, "time out of a bottle" or "still ticking." There is something about the the ordered corner, the upright watch and the upright, static goblet that bothers me. On one hand it is the cognitive dissonance, on the other it is the sheer, gratuitous stasis. I am not smart enough to make a connection between these elements, yet there is nothing to tell me that the whole thing is meant to be bizarre. I am left wondering "What would the picture have been like if the photographer had, instead, tried to depict pouring time out of a broken glass?" And so on. Apologies if you find none of this helpful.

sha tte r ed time
by saintaugust

Comment by Loki:
I like how your title is j ag ged. Good Job. The picture has a nice composition.

sha tte r ed time
by saintaugust

Comment by hotpasta:
good clarity...nice tone, I even like the way you have written the title

slow escape
by saintaugust

Comment by pcody:
I ended up giving this a four. The main reason was because the couple is leaving the frame, which was somewhat explained in the title. I feel that the title was created to overcome the composition, however. I did like how the rain was handled. The distortion is fun.