Following the Yellow Stripes
by JEFFJSB

Comment by jduffett:
Nice job on the photo, but the car sure could use a set of lowering springs!

Following the Yellow Stripes
by JEFFJSB

Comment by Skip:
nice idea. too bad the yellow doesn't really "pop". also, it feels a little too centered. looks a little soft; maybe could have gone out another stop or two.

Following the Yellow Stripes
by JEFFJSB

Comment by sblair2146:
Interesting angle for the shot.

Following the Yellow Stripes
by JEFFJSB

Comment by Azrifel:
I like it how you positioned the car and how the lines lead toward it. The low angle from which you shot gives an interesting view of the car.
In my opinion the balance between top, bottom and horizon is a bit off, the horizon and subject are to centered.

Following the Yellow Stripes
by JEFFJSB

Comment by whagerbaumer:
A nice point of view. I like how far you can see the stripes under the cat. I like this better when I crop off the buildings on the left. A 7.

No Power Locks, No Power Windows
by JEFFJSB

Comment by AutumnCat:
I like this subject. Works well in b&w. I think this could use a bit more contrast. Would also suggest a bit more interesting angle or crop for the shot.

No Power Locks, No Power Windows
by JEFFJSB

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Good subject. I am starting to think black & white is detrimental to this challenge because it ages the photo with the subject and removes part of that old/new contrast feeling. Speaking of contrast... coulda used a little more I think. I also would not have cropped that close to the top of the carriage. Seems like a good rule for this type of shot would be to crop as if someone was sitting in the seat. Lastly, I would've removed the rock(?). Hope this helps. :-)

No Power Locks, No Power Windows
by JEFFJSB

Comment by Arcanist:
Definitely low tech transport. Your choice of a bleaching in b/w has a positive effect on aging the image even more. It is well placed and cropped, perhaps slightly too much on the top, but this is not detracting in any way. Nice job!

No Power Locks, No Power Windows
by JEFFJSB

Comment by L2:
Good subject. A bit more contrast might have lifted the focal point away from the background, but overall a good shot.

No Power Locks, No Power Windows
by JEFFJSB

Comment by Gatorguy:
This needs something to separate it from the background. More contrast, DOF, different angle, color - I'm not sure what the solution is. As for the concept of low tech, it certainly fits. 5