Act Naturally
by L800Lisa

Comment by Rebecca:
Too much of a snapshot and a shoehorn.

Act Naturally
by L800Lisa

Comment by ade_mcfade:
NOTE....

I'm looking at the image first and tyrying to guess the title. If I can't guess, I can't give high marks :-(

I thought it was Girl...

Act Naturally
by L800Lisa

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I wish I had Carmen Diaz to pose for me. ;-)

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by Rikki:
Greetings from the Critique Club

My comments here are unbiased and are meant as constructive criticisms ;) Now on to the show:

This image unfortunately does not hold one's attention. While nice and "cute", it doesn't really tell me what she is envious about. You must remember that your image should be able to tell a story. The viewer needs to see your image and say, "Yeah I can totally see that".

The crop is tight on the top and bottom that it almost looks like a mistake. Maybe a different angle for this would have been effective. Had the little girl been oriented diagonally against the image, I think it would have added another layer of dynamism in the image.

Keep on shooting and continue to learn from the folks in our group!

Cheers!

Rikki

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by temba:
This needs more to tell it's story. What/who is she envious of?

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by Gracechild7:
She doesn't look very envious. It looks more like a generic snapshot.

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by byrongates:
No concept.

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by gjumi:
5

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by MacDonald:
what a sweetie

Envy
by L800Lisa

Comment by aplomb76:
If pouting was a deadly sin, this would be a winner. Unless she's envious that another person has the camera, I don't understand.