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02/27/2006 08:50:06 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
My comments here are unbiased and are meant as constructive criticisms ;) Now on to the show:
This image unfortunately does not hold one's attention. While nice and "cute", it doesn't really tell me what she is envious about. You must remember that your image should be able to tell a story. The viewer needs to see your image and say, "Yeah I can totally see that".
The crop is tight on the top and bottom that it almost looks like a mistake. Maybe a different angle for this would have been effective. Had the little girl been oriented diagonally against the image, I think it would have added another layer of dynamism in the image.
Keep on shooting and continue to learn from the folks in our group!
Cheers!
Rikki |
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02/21/2006 06:51:09 AM |
| This needs more to tell it's story. What/who is she envious of? |
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02/19/2006 12:36:07 AM |
| She doesn't look very envious. It looks more like a generic snapshot. |
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02/18/2006 09:25:32 PM |
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02/18/2006 11:17:29 AM |
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02/18/2006 03:55:48 AM |
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02/15/2006 01:51:48 PM |
| If pouting was a deadly sin, this would be a winner. Unless she's envious that another person has the camera, I don't understand. |
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02/15/2006 11:08:48 AM |
| too many kid pictures. I don't want to see family photos. |
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02/15/2006 02:54:07 AM |
| Can't really see envy here, what is she envious of ... where is it? |
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02/15/2006 02:40:45 AM |
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