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redpandaComment by karmat: Critique Club Critique
by karmat
This is a very interesting, clean, colorful photo, that really pulls the viewer in.
Technically, I couldn't offer any thing to change. The focus seems to be pretty clear, the colors are awesome, and the light is perfect for me. I really like the bright red against the blue sky.
Compositionally, I like how the eyes (and viewer) are "pulled" toward the sky with the coaster. (Just as an aside, the passengers look so relaxed, it almost seems surreal). My only suggestion would be to have a bit more space at the top. The bulk of the picture and the "weight" of it seems to be in the bottom right third, but the eye is lead to the top, and out of the frame. This leads to a slightly unbalanced feeling, I think (which in some ways is effective for your subject).
It is an interesting take on the challenge, and I look forward to seeing some of your other entries!
Best wishes in the future.
Karma
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