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10/01/2005 05:26:28 PM |
Critique Club Critique
by karmat
This is a very interesting, clean, colorful photo, that really pulls the viewer in.
Technically, I couldn't offer any thing to change. The focus seems to be pretty clear, the colors are awesome, and the light is perfect for me. I really like the bright red against the blue sky.
Compositionally, I like how the eyes (and viewer) are "pulled" toward the sky with the coaster. (Just as an aside, the passengers look so relaxed, it almost seems surreal). My only suggestion would be to have a bit more space at the top. The bulk of the picture and the "weight" of it seems to be in the bottom right third, but the eye is lead to the top, and out of the frame. This leads to a slightly unbalanced feeling, I think (which in some ways is effective for your subject).
It is an interesting take on the challenge, and I look forward to seeing some of your other entries!
Best wishes in the future.
Karma |
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09/25/2005 01:55:31 AM |
| Love your creativity with this challenge amazing colors and dof...how did you get this angle --8-- |
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09/24/2005 05:09:54 AM |
| interesting perspective. well done. |
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09/23/2005 09:30:46 AM |
| This could of worked in many challenges. Nice capture and comp. Interesting subject matter. |
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09/23/2005 04:35:33 AM |
| How did you get that shot? |
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09/22/2005 05:33:48 AM |
| The skin colour seems a tad artificial. The angle's cool. |
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09/21/2005 03:15:37 PM |
| Oooooh, this is making my stomach drop!!! |
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09/21/2005 12:52:41 PM |
| Wow - excellent angle and the colors are great. Very cool! Good luck in the challenge. 10! |
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09/21/2005 02:37:09 AM |
| Good thinking , alongwith good composition |
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09/20/2005 08:09:28 PM |
| This is a very clear and daring shot with the camera at risk of falling ;-) Daring effort and great shot. |
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09/20/2005 04:43:35 PM |
| Great capture. I can feel my belly dropping now.... |
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09/19/2005 08:31:44 PM |
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09/19/2005 07:44:52 PM |
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09/19/2005 10:17:16 AM |
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09/19/2005 10:16:13 AM |
| This a very geometric shot. I love the angle, saturation and action. Neat! 10. |
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