Jay Spectre
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by Ennil:
I want to kill those guys, they are so not worth of you. I mean look at the expressions! They could at least try to look a bit more interested instead of having that moody, awful expressions!

You're awsome hun, I love these last pictures.

Rebellion
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by phreak:
good job

Rebellion
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by Crisik:
great idea and great shot

but I have one question - how did you managed to get a photo in the "Photographer's Comments"? I even studied the code but I am not able to do this in my portfolio. Tx

Jay Spectre
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by phayanak:
I absolutely love the style of your photography and you are one of my favorites! This picture is so cool and I'd love to hear how you've done it ... wanna share it with us ??

It Never Leaves My Side
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by mpeters:
Hi from the Critique Club.

Uhhh. I drew this picture, why??? :) I don't feel qualified to critique your work but here it goes.

First Impression: What cool stuff was done to the walls. But, you said it was just your basic PP and you really dont remember. Guess its paint overspray. I didnt recognize the face as I've only been here at DPC for a few months, but its safe to say itll be recognized from here on out.

Composition: The paint cans were genius. even though there isn't much color in them, the little they provide makes an interesting balance to rest of the pic. Good placement. Im a fan of the minimalist type picture and this one has a some of that for me with your position in an almost empty room. you did a nice job of including just a sliver of the ceiling for proportion.

Technical: I dont care for the heavy shadows on the lh side of your face... awwh nevermind. The shadow is a little "monster" looking though so I wonder if a slighly different light positon might have given it a little more shape.

Challenge: Seriously now, you took the "mundane" idea that a shadow always follows you around, added a cool environment and turned it into an interesting picture. IMO thats what makes this pic "cool"(is cool only an 80's expression?).

As always, great job and I personally don't think people vote you up just because you are recognizable. Pretty sure your pictures would garner high scores even with one of ROFLMAO's wood modeling figures :)

Mark
P.M. if you have any questions and keep shooting.

Jay Spectre
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by jaxed:
By far the coolest photo I've seen of yours. Everything about it is stunning.

It Never Leaves My Side
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by solitude:
The Best shot for a Rock Album Cover!It Will Work!

Notice 4
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice, good focus, great portrait work.

Composition:
Good composition, it doesn't rellay play too heavy of the notice you used for the title, and that may have confused the voters ... who are often confused :)

Subject:
Defiantely meets off centred, both for the bloke and the signage.

Technical (Colour and light):
I like the lighting here, would have liked to know what you actually used ... but probably daylight in the majority with a fill flash ... oh well :)

To grow its vote?:
You have found an interesting character - again. It is nicely off centred, I don't know why it did not do better, the grittiness of the colours and the reality of the picture may have counted against it this time.

Summary:
I like this shot, it is good for the portfolio, even if not the highest scoring. But this game ain't only about ribbons really.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

It Never Leaves My Side
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by mike747:
yet again.... another amazing picture and well deserved ribbon!!!
well done joey!!!

It Never Leaves My Side
by Joey Lawrence

Comment by taterbug:
Congrats man on anotherrrrrr ribbon :-)