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Travis99Comment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Very nice portrait.
I love the backlighting that shines through her hair. In my opinion the lighting here is really good. No distracting hot spots or dark shadows and it's really pretty even throughout the photo.
I like the diffent angle you chose for this, and I think that the cropping is well done too. I like the diagonals.
The only thing that I keep coming back to that I might like to see differently is the positioning of the eyes. They seem to be looking just a bit too far to the right (her left). I wouldn't want to see them looking straight at the camera, but maybe just a bit more toward the camera would seem more natural. Maybe natural isn't the best word, but I hope you get my point.
I love the selective coloring. Really draws the attention to the necklace. I think you did a really nice job with that and for me, that's what really makes the photo stand out.
I'm debating weather or not this would make an effective ad. While it is a really good portrait, I'm not sure if it would make me want to rush right out and buy this necklace. Where would the text go?
Focus and clarity are really good, and overall the image has high visual appeal to me and I would rate this well.
~Heather~