Wine over Time
by kevinswope

Comment by sher:
nice concept!

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Comment by PTLParsons:
This is just my personal opinion but I don't like the angle of the camera when taking this photo. Also there is only one square and you cropped it off. In our mind we know all the colors are squares but we don't see it. The angle makes me feel like I'm falling as I look at the photo. Personally this has no appeal.

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Comment by PaulMdx:
Composition: Excellent. As soon as I saw this pic I turned my head 45 degrees to try and work out what they are.
Technical: Excellent. Not completely sure about the orange background. Maybe a darker colour?
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: I love interesting photos, and you've got this one pretty spot on. 9

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Comment by MattW:
Nice photograph, but the objects in this picture look more like rectangels than squares.

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Comment by Turbotech:
I looked at this shot for a few minutes and I hate to say it but I do not think it does very much for me.

Village Next Left
by kevinswope

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Joshua...

I'm not really sure why this image didn't score better than it did. Technically, I don't see much wrong with it. I think there may be a couple areas where some improvement could be helpful though.

1 - This image could be slightly sharper to bring out some of the details in the scene. One pass with the photoshop sharpen filter could do the trick nicely on this one.

2 - The lighting is a little harsh. The detail in the trees coupled with the light/dark in the image could be making this image a little on the 'busy' side for the viewer. This particular scene could possibly be better photographed at a different time of day or when the sky is overcast. This would help remove some of the sharp lighting contrast and possily help your viewer focus more attention on the indian structures in your image :)

I really like the way the 'pathway' leads the viewer into this scene. When I shoot scenes like this, I always try to get low to the ground with the camera also. It makes that 'path' a much more dominant part of the image...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

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Comment by vtruan:
Shows part of a square, but...

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Comment by paynekj:
I like the colours, and the depth of field is just right, it's the lack of squareness that bothers me. Perhaps a different angle would have helped.

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Comment by Allen:
I think you did a very nice job on this picture I think how you have the brightest color upfront and then they keep getting less bright as you get to the end. i think that the picture needs to be a little more in focus. Good Work

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Comment by jjbeguin:
interesting idea for a composition, color progression is a little harsh. I would try for that one (if you use photoshop) to pull up the hue to +40 OR to decrease the saturation to -45 to get a smoother color progression. hope this helps.