Lynn Canyon Suspension Bridge
by Jak

Comment by Freebie:
I think this was agood idea In mop it would have impacted more if there were less people perhaps just the guy in the orange top and with him positioned further away from the camera.The sunshine on the r/h side is a bit over exposed

Lynn Canyon Suspension Bridge
by Jak

Comment by crabappl3:
Near flawless. Great lines and subject. Good framing and lighting! Well done, in my top 10 this week!

Lynn Canyon Suspension Bridge
by Jak

Comment by jmsetzler:
nice work... this is a good example of leading lines... the bridge leads nicely to your subject :) - setzler

Lynn Canyon Suspension Bridge
by Jak

Comment by kandyj:
Great idea, illustrates the challenge well. A little overexposed on the right. A cloudy day or a different time of the day may have helped this. Good luck. 8

Annual Report
by Jak

Comment by wingy:
interesting perspective. I think the somewhat uneven look adds to the shot.

Annual Report
by Jak

Comment by lisae:
Very pixelated. I think you either have a low end camera, or used the wrong scaling method on this photo. The composition is fairly straightforward... I really like the colours here though. I think it could work as a stock photo if it was better executed.

No Questions Asked
by Jak

Comment by MattW:
good idea

Annual Report
by Jak

Comment by KarenB:
great angle.. great time of day for lighting, great framing... awesome title.

Breakfast
by Jak

Comment by tcherring:
CRITIQUE CLUB

Lighting: Good, but it seems a little wrong for food. I've noticed that food is very hard to light correctly without skewing the colors or making it look unattractive. The shadows are a little distracting. I think the biggest problem with the lighting here is that the flash plays off the grease in the food, making all of it look a little "over-fattening".

Challenge: Definitely meets the challenge with the egg yolks. The yolk on the fork is a nice touch!

Subject: Very clever, and really quite the breakfast! Do you do your own cooking??? =)

Technical: I think the camera settings were fine, but again, the flash was a little harsh on the grease and shininess of the food.

Overall: A great idea that just needs some softening and cleaning up. I do think it's very clever!!

No Questions Asked
by Jak

Comment by Amiee:
Nice idea. The image needs more though. IT's a little bit boring. Nice clear image and colors. Good job.