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Falconbridge is falling down...... falling down...by BigSmilesComment by crabappl3: Howdy! This shot, although has a humorous element, is missing some key technical qualities. The tower itself is leaning to the right (maybe why you titled it this). This makes the eye feel the shot is unbalanced. The positioning of the tower in the middle of the frame puts all the focus on it, however, with so much of the legs from the tower showing your eye isn't drawn to the text at the top. Instead you get lost in the fence and tree. The tree also makes for noise that isn't needed. If you had cropped just above the tree and used maybe a square framing as a result the eye would clearly see the text on the tower and the viewer would relate this to the challenge better. The blue in the tower is nice, it however is flat against the sky behind it. Upping your contrast a little might help seperate the two elements. The edges around the tower are a little soft, maybe a light sharpen to help make it more crisp.
This is a funny idea, I just feel it got lost in your translation to the viewers.
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Roman Numeral 6 (VI)by BigSmilesComment by SharQ: I can understand your idea here, but it isn't at all clear enough, I feel. Also, it is far too blown out in the highlights for my taste. There seems to be a lot of digital or compression artifacts along the edges as well. (4) |
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