Milk's Perfect Form
by myqyl

Comment by kandyj:
Critique Club comments:

As noted below, I liked this shot when I first saw it.

Composition: Good, I like the way the eye flows downward with the milk into the chocolate. Yes, the middle candy could have been scooted over a bit to the right or left to avoid lining up with the wrapped bar, although you would have needed to take another bite, ha! If the bottom piece was a bit more angled, it might have made the composition a little more interesting.

Creativity: The best feature of this shot. Loved the milk flowing into the candy and is a great idea for this challenge!

Technical quality: fair The wrinkles are a bit distracting, but I really liked the way the color of the backdrop worked with the colors in the wrapper and the very soft lighting. The chocolate crumb could have been removed for a cleaner look. Would have liked a little less lighting on the foil, and a tad more on the words on the wrapper. As noted above, the background colors work well with the shot and help bring the focus to the candy, as well as the contrast in the shot.

Overall: This is a fairly nice shot, shows that maybe you rushed a bit to get it done and from your comments I can see why and understand the technical flaws.

Hope this helps!

SkyLight ^ 2
by myqyl

Comment by amonteforte:
Wow! Very neat work.

SkyLight ^ 2
by myqyl

Comment by irae:
Maybe at another time of day, when the interior/exterior exposure could be better balanced? It's a shame to have all those lines leading to almost nothing. The walls do give a great dimensionality to the image, and I love the light on them.

SkyLight
by myqyl

Comment by dphillips:
Is this allowed in both challenges?? Interested to see how the voting will go, as I can only vote in one challenge. Think it will do better in Squares. Good luck

SkyLight ^ 2
by myqyl

Comment by jab119:
ummmm... this was in the members challenge also.....

SkyLight ^ 2
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Comment by ozaibak:
Very trippy image, a perfect 10.

SkyLight ^ 2
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Comment by Gracious:
Wonderful abstract...well done!

SkyLight
by myqyl

Comment by goodtempo:
neat skylight and nice composition, i would have liked to have seen it cropped square with the skylight centered, i copied it and tried it. but it is still a powerfull image.

SkyLight
by myqyl

Comment by tfarrell23:
very nice entry.....cool

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Comment by KimInNB:
Interesting perspective.