The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by eckoe:
Thanks to all that made comments. A few responses if any of you check back.

First, yeah, the light is a bit flat. Something I actually tend to be drawn to. I think I need to figure out what's desired, so that I can hit it a bit more.

Catlord and DrAchoo mentioned the curve is a bit odd. Quite honestly, they are being held up by her hands. It's the only way to get the curve I wanted with the "assets" I had, as they're larger than average and her natural curve didn't work as well as this curve did, and I really didn't want to get the "she's got clothes on" drop in the votes that some of her bra's could have created for a slightly more natural look. If I retake, I'll keep that in mind however.

To explain that, what I was looking for, was the viewers eyes to move from the tendril of hair down from the cleavage to the lower right corner and off the page. I think I accomplished that with a couple people comenting as such.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by tsheets:
Nice perspective, lighting is a little flat.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by trnqlty:
The lighting is flat. Maybe experimenting with levels and curves would help the pic to pop a little more.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by dahkota:
I like the crop/composition. Feel the image is a little dark for the subject. I like that oyu left the freckles in and the curl in. 6 - goodluck in the challenge!

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by Mal37:
Try croppng just a bit off of the left and top for a stronger composition.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by Tallbloke:
Interesting, but not sure if this would stand up as an interesting image outside this challenge. Wel done and for submitting to this difficult challenge anyway.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by BeeGee:
As Austin Powers might say: "curvy, baby, yeah". Pretty good shot, well composed, lit ok, just a bit unspectacular, i.e. dull. Curves alone don't make a good picture, in my humble opinion. I've seen much worse before though, so I'll give you a 7.

Bruno

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by tuffy:
I really like the tendril of curled hair that leads from the upper corner. It has a strong diagonal & nice smooth lines.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by pcody:
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Message edited by author 2005-09-29 16:44:50.

The true meaning of 'curves'
by eckoe

Comment by ubique:
Well I am impressed, although the suntan line is a bit distracting. On the other hand, the stray tendril of hair is a great touch. 7