Lisaby
NodeComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
A nice portrait, but doesn't seem quite studio to me.
Composition:
The crop is just a very little bit tight for a traditional portrait. It's not bad though.
Subject:
This is just part of my template. The subject is clearly seperated from the b/g though.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
All good, but I'd like to see a little more USM in your post process.
To grow its vote?:
Hard challenge, but I think a more solid background would have given it the studio look the voters were looking for.
Summary:
OK, it seems that I may sound a bt negative in my critiue so far. But, I like this portrait. It shows a very flattering photo of your sis with much character. All-in-all, I think you took a great photo of her.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy