Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by egillbjarki:
Thank you for this very helpfull critique, I totally agree with you there. The faciall expressions are not as strong as everything els in this photograph, an yes you are right, I have a bunch of shots of them in this position. I´m going to look at them a few more times and see if I can find a better facial expressions, its a must!

Once again, thank you very mutch, I put a lot of work into gaining thins look.

Greatings from Iceland,
Egill Bjarki

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by jmoore:
Critique Club
WOW!!! I love it! Do you really need a critique, I am sure you already know it is great. The tones and contrast are perfect especially for the subject matter. I love you location and crop, it is just perfect. However I will be nit picky on a few things, mostly facial expression. You have pulled everything else together so wonderfully I can't help but wonder if you have another shot in the bunch that has the right expressions. (This is only my opinion) The guy with the glasses is perfect! The guy on the other end looks like he is mid sentence and it doesn't fit well with the other expressions. I would have liked either all of them looking or all of them doing their own thing. Having two looking at the camera and two in their own work does not work for me. I do think expression can make or break a photo, this is so well executed that I don't mind much, but I think it could have been even more wonderful. Great job!!! By the way, I don't think you need such an extensive border and think black line would look very sharp

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by egillbjarki:
Þakka ykkur fyrir kæru landar!

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by eirasi:
Vígaleg og flott mynd. Til hamingju með topp 10

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by gisli:
Yil hamingju með áttuna góð mynd.

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by arngrimur:
Sumir vörubílar eru flottari en aðrir. Þessi er svalur. Mjög fín s/h vínnsla á myndinni. Til hamingju með besta skor til þessa.

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by aussieannie:
I just scanned through the entries, and I am pleased you got in top 10 as it really caught my eye.
Are they a band, or what are the guy's connection with each other?

Well done

Sorry, just discovered the comments below. I am just learning the system.

Message edited by author 2005-09-12 08:54:47.

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by egillbjarki:
Thank you all very mutch for the comments. I decided on going for a high contrast theme, there for this challenge was really suitable for this photograph I took for my friend and his band. I am really prleased and greatfull with finishing in the top 10.

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by SJCarter:
Thought this would do well - and I'm sure the band is stoked! WTG & congrats on your top 10 finish!

Band: Ask The Slave
by egillbjarki

Comment by Tammer:
Decent contrast, but for me, the large black border is a bit too much. Looks like it would work well for a CD cover.