shiney new cars
by shutterfly

Comment by emily:
you spelled shiny wrong

ring around the rosie
by shutterfly

Comment by David Ey:
You have a very good eye for composition

at the bottom of the slide
by shutterfly

Comment by chrysalis:
OK. But motion study doesn't mean just slow the shutter and get some blur.

lust for sale
by shutterfly

Comment by Azrifel:
I ran into this pic again and I remembered it from the challenge. Yes, sex sells, but besides that it is also a great pic. I like the exposure, your friend Emma really stands out. The hair, skin tones, the blue of the lingerie and subject shadow detail are captured.
The wall on the upper right balances very well with the hair, while the edge between the wall and the bedd adds perspective. Because the right side is blown out exposurewise all focus is on Emma. The way the money is distributed over the bed (could use the wrong word there, English is not my first language) adds depth.
Her position is very good. Original and giving a good profile, definitely creating a feeling of lust (altough I will not pay). :-)
To come back on the exposure, I think you did a good job. The main subject is really good, the overexposure on the right and around the money is a justified tradeoff.

at the bottom of the slide
by shutterfly

Comment by catpixel:
The expression is great!

wet leaf
by shutterfly

Comment by Yellowpeep:
Good crop. I also think that you handled the reflection of the water well.

abstract blue
by shutterfly

Comment by zadore:
...from Critique Club...

Hi Wendy

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Good gosh, where is this suppose to be inserted into??? :)

COMPOSITION:
Awesome! No matter where you look first, you end up following every curve on this 'probe'. :)

TECHNICAL:
I would have prefered for the tip to be in focus, but it still works nicely this way. Lighting really brings out the shapes. Very nice. :)

ARTISTIC:
Meet the challenge? Duh!...of course. Interesting subject? Well, if I don't know what it is, then it sure is interesting. :)

OVERALL:
Great shot. Works well with the white background. I didn't get to vote on your photo, but if I had, I'd give it a strong 9.

Cheers.

wet leaf
by shutterfly

Comment by amonteforte:
Perfect capture; focus is right there.

at the bottom of the slide
by shutterfly

Comment by HBunch:
Great motion. I wish that the lighting had been just a tad brighter, however, if your camera is like mine (no shutter speed settings) you might have had to have low lighting to force the shutter to stay open just a bit? Her hair blends in too well with the slide, that is my reason for wishing there were more light if possible. Otherwise a nice shot of motion. Good luck in the challenge.

wet leaf
by shutterfly

Comment by Kaz:
Great color, composition. great work.