karmacomaby
stephanComment by Azrifel: ~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
Composition (content)
Arghh, this must be the most difficult picture to comment on in my whole CC career. :)
I tried to capture the mood and create a visual representation of what I think fits to the song.
I know the song, but I don't like it (music, never listened to the lyrics) to put it mildly. This image puzzles me, I don't know what I am seeing. I wan't to, but I can't. Perhaps that is a little frustrating. The mood it expresses to me is a dark and depressed one.
I have looked up the lyrics. They seem to be a bit dark and puzzled as well, so I guess you have done a good job.
..duplicate, then you wait for the next kuwait....
..i drink on a daily basis
though it seldom cools my temper
it never cools my temper....
Interesting. When it comes to drinking by the way, that could be reflected in the strange curvy flow in the top. Like the world distortions you see when you are drunk, just before you fall on the floor with the world spinning very very very hard. (I succesfully avoid that the last couple of years).
The thing that I most like about the picture itself (without the feeling it expresses) is the color and arrangement of the yellow/green texture.
The figure seems to have the profile of a teddybear. My first thought about the green stuff was a green lit LP, but it has got to many tracks.
This is something that works for you and then it is great, or it doesn't and then it means nothing to you.
Background
No comment.
Camera Work (Technical)
Was there away to avoid that spot in the yellow, left of the figure?
Digital Processing (technical)
No comment.
My opinion
I don't really know what too think of it.