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| 03/14/2003 02:29:42 PM |
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| 03/13/2003 07:51:47 PM |
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| 03/13/2003 04:52:46 PM |
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| 03/13/2003 01:47:19 PM |
Planet Eggby GinaRothfelsComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This particular picture is real real close to being very good. The composition is pretty good. There is a little naturally occurring noise that I think takes away from the image considerably. I think the ring of bubbles and stuff over the top of the yolk and around that arc are very distracting. I think if you could remove those, you improve the composition substantially. There is also a small bunch of them on the bottom right of the yolk that would be better if removed. The ones in the white of the egg are a bit distorted and don't look so much like grains of sand. I think they can stay and not be too distracting. The angle and the macro effect really make this picture.
Technical - I think this picture, well focused would've done much better. The image is just a little bit short of sharp. It may be just one more "sharpen" away from that actually. The exposure could've been just a little more too to really bring out the yellow of the yolk. Its close. That may be possible to fix with PS as well.
Overall - A good concept for a picture. I think with a little honing this will be a really nice image. I think your pic was graded a little harshly probably due to the sharpness. I'd be lying if I didn't say that was a sticking point of mine too. Hope this could be a little helpful for you. Good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
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| 03/13/2003 01:04:16 PM |
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| 03/11/2003 07:34:42 PM |
A barrier between two worldsby GinaRothfelsComment by Olyuzi: I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I like the surreal effect you got with the over exposed background and also the duotones of this shot. The silouette of the person under the bridge is really neat, but I also wish you had cropped out the power lines tower and also waited to get another shot of the bridge without any moving traffic. |
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| 03/11/2003 01:58:29 PM |
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| 03/11/2003 09:56:25 AM |
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| 03/10/2003 02:22:11 PM |
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| 03/06/2003 07:41:45 PM |
Planet Eggby GinaRothfelsComment by kiwiness: Wow! You captured this one well. Those two bubbles at the front give this shot so much impact! I would print this one. |
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