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Comment by karmat:
Very well thought out. I like the green of the napkin, but the light is a little strong on the sandwich for me, though. karmat

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Comment by tomlewis1980:
Mmmmm... pencils.

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Comment by mcmurma:
interesting idea. but it looks a bit crunchy for my taste. the blown highlight on the sandwich is distracting, but overall i like the composition. well done. (6) ~mcmurma

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Comment by HBunch:
Pencils. Does a body good. Set up is great. I like the creativity here. Lighting is good, however the bread to the right side is a little bright. Not overly bright, but I wouldn't want it any brighter. Reflections in the plate and fork are subtle enough that they aren't distracting. The angle is ok. I'd like to see it at a more flat angle also for comparrison, but then again, it might be a bit boring and plain at a flatter angle. Great job and good luck in the challenge.

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Comment by rlrforte:
Very creative. Nice idea!

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Comment by waltoml:
Nicely done. If I was going to be picky, I'd say that the lighting on the sandwich isn't very consistant. Kind of bright on the right side. But I'm not that picky. 7

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Comment by ron:
The pencils in the "bite" look like you really ate them! Clever idea. The napkin is a good touch as is the white placemat. There's nothing like it in the challenge - congrats on your cretive treatment!

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Comment by MarkRob:
Yuck - I don't want to know how you got this arrangement - Yes I do - No I don't. I love the idea. I would like to see the picture a bit brighter. The fork is dark - and there is a mystery shadow across the plate that is unfortunate (7)

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Comment by jeremya:
Just a thought, Why do you need a fork to eat a pencil sandwich?

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Comment by Baldur:
Enjoy your meal!!!! Great idea.