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Comments Received by rll07
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| 09/23/2002 12:46:00 AM | |
| 08/23/2002 05:05:00 PM | |
| 08/22/2002 04:39:00 PM | Pressure Pointby rll07Comment by Remie: Great idea, but most of the attention is drawn to the clamp itself though, not to the real point of interest. I think this could have been achieved by shifting everything downwards even though it would have cut off part of the clamp. Somehow, I also would like to see the pencil being really squeezed. |
| 08/22/2002 02:23:00 AM | |
| 08/21/2002 11:09:00 PM | |
| 08/21/2002 07:56:00 PM | Pressure Pointby rll07Comment by Gracious: From my perspective: Meets challenge:Yes Technical:Well done Appeal/Artistic:Ok Composition:Very good. Strong lines, uncluttered, good background Originality:Excellent. I don't think the average person would have thought this up. A simple union of two unrelated objects. The yellow pencil stands out among the mostly black and white image. Comments:Good job. Good luck in the challenge. |
| 08/21/2002 06:39:00 PM | Pressure Pointby rll07Comment by Kavey: Like the weird angles and the lighting, and the simplicity of contents. 6, Kavey |
| 08/21/2002 01:28:00 PM | |
| 08/21/2002 01:00:00 PM | Pressure Pointby rll07Comment by RedRuthann: Very creative idea. IMO (not to offend) I think this would've been better with diff lighting. I'm going to assume that the the grey background was not itentional. I suggest manipulating the white balance on the camera or tweaking the gamma in PS. I say this because when I satarted, I didn't even realize how grey the white was. It also appears to me that the point of focus is on the eraser - where as I would have chosen the point of the pencil. One last thing, I would've prefered to be able to see the details a little more on the screw. I'm in the process of learning about how to manipulate light myself - (boy I need practice), but I think I'm slowly catching on. I do like the composition and the idea...ooh just thought of something - would've been more effective if the pencil appeared to be jumping out/reaching out - I can almost sense that was possible the intention - to me, like I mentioned earlier, would focus on the pencil and use a medium dof - only to slightly blur the back - creating that reaching out effect. I'm in no a way an expert and only giving you my take on this. I still recognize the effort and time put into this. Great job! 5 Ruthann |
| 08/20/2002 07:11:00 PM | Pressure Pointby rll07Comment by autool: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7, Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing5, Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10, Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4, Total Averaged Rating7. Autool |
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