September
by MAK

Comment by juneCS:
I like the light from the sky and the repetation of the poles. Let's try to crop the below out and make the front pole as foreground. I am not a professional photographer, but let me know if it helps. And the horizon maybe a little tilted. Not sure if you intended or not. 7

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by MAK

Comment by Koriyama:
Overall, I find the subject a bit bland and the central black area takes away from the sharper points at the top and bottom. It's a nicely composed photo.

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by MAK

Comment by Gauti:
strange how it seem to be in focus on top and bottom but not in middle. ok, I understand now, the plan of focus is behind the front of the closest link. Deeper DOF is my recommendation.

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by MAK

Comment by Bud:
Very well done, the unique subject here makes a very strong foto, it would have benefitted from a white or black background to set it off more. 8.

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Comment by aksha:
too shallow, i think. i like the composition, tho.

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Comment by Gatorguy:
Good representation of th challenge. My only nit is I find the shadow at the weld joint on the left side of the link a little distracting.

September
by MAK

Comment by Gauti:
The horizon is quite a bit tilted to the left. Nice sunrays in the far BG.
Bit too dull for my tastes (colour vise) - needs a litle more "sparkle"

September
by MAK

Comment by Pedro:
if you're going to do a lot of burning, use your colour balance or a de-saturation tool when you're done to lose the blue cast. Burning on an adjustment layer is the easiest way to control it.
Aside from that, very nice pic. I'm sure a few will mention the slanter horizon, but i don't mind it...together with the posts it leads your eye nicely to the H2O.

good luck,

Pedro

September
by MAK

Comment by Kathyc:
A lower point of view might be good with this scene.

September
by MAK

Comment by claudia26:
the slanted horizon is disturbing