Is it cheese?
by toddhead

Comment by cbeller:
it isn't sharp (heh..that's a pun). Honestly, a difficult shot to pull off, and you made a good attempt. Looks like you got a little camera shake.

Guide Rail..
by toddhead

Comment by admart01:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I'm not sure I can add any brilliant comments from the ones you've already received...

Your play of light and shadow as well as dof are what make this shot interesting. Use of black and white and right angles makes the metalic, cold feel of the shot jump out. I think if the fore-most bars were crisper the feeling would be intensified and that would make the shot stronger (to those of us who liked the sterile feel the metal gives the viewer). Likewise a bigger difference between dark and light areas would intensify the impact.

Your eye for abstract composition is clearly shown here. Nicely done.

Regards,
Theresa

Is it cheese?
by toddhead

Comment by GeneralE:
It would be fun to have the gear to do this sometime!

Is it cheese?
by toddhead

Comment by moodville:
Getting the exposure on moon shots can be tough but you've managed to get it right here. Good detail on the surface, although it still seems a little blurry. Definitely a good effort!

Cubs Win! Cubs Lose!
by toddhead

Comment by Cam:
Being an Astro's fan, Cubs lose sounds good to me. :)
Should be a tight race all year.
Funny photo, very original idea, nice job.

Cubs Win! Cubs Lose!
by toddhead

Comment by Count:
Cool effect, nice job. How did you do this one?

Is it cheese?
by toddhead

Comment by marbo:
Did you miss the eclipse or on the wrong side of the world.

Cubs Win! Cubs Lose!
by toddhead

Comment by photom:
Idea is great, execution is ok. Expressions are just right. Focus is like the Cubs - "almost". Stilll - an enjoyable take on opposites.

Cubs Win! Cubs Lose!
by toddhead

Comment by Neuferland:
Very nice attempt at a longer exposure or double exposure. But the lack of focus, lighting and contrast really hurt this shot. Also the backdrop is very distracting with the folds and such. But keep trying, the expressions are priceless! :) A 3

Painting the Corners
by toddhead

Comment by tails57:
This is awesome!! Being a huge baseball fan I got it the minute I looked at the photo. I think the border is brilliant, don't let the criticism of it deter you from using one again. It was very fitting for this!!!