night cap
by breezee70

Comment by mandyp:
A little too bright and a little too dark.

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by C-town driver:
Nice picture and composition, but the lighting seems too harsh

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by ronlcox:
Light is harsh. Next time use a diffuser on your flash or use a flash with a diffuser.

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by ericsuth:
get away from the flash...the line in the back could've been eliminated. all the lines seem off, if you deemed elements important to the composition you might want to keep them in completely (glass & ashtray) or try a more creative arrangement of the pieces. maybe a more downward shot would've been better?

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by lbWhaples:
better on still life to not use flash.

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by jxpfeer:
ahhh my favorite ... sapphire :)
Looks like a little hot on the flash... maybe an off camera flash, or dialing down the flash exposure a bit, could've helped.

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by edwalk74:
Not very original. Smoking and Drinking are the most obvious habits. Decent photograph though.

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by ElGiri:
burnt out, poorly lit, tilted, lazy cropping

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by TabbyCat:
Good one! I love how the smoke is wafting from the ashtray. Very nice effect. Unfortunately, the bottle cover is too bright (making it look washed out). Suggestions: Show the whole bottle instead of cutting the top off, make the background completely black (shoot the picture on/near the table's edge so the table won't show up in the background), and be conscious of perspective as it looks like the bottle is leaning just a bit to the left. (Could be me, though.) Overall, a very nice picture and it captures the "Habits" theme perfectly. Great work!

night cap
by breezee70

Comment by Count:
Great idea for a shot. Also happens to be my night cap of choice (well, except the smoke which I quit 6 months ago! still want them though), lighting is hard though and could be improved with a softer source (looks like you used direct flash?)