Kauaiby
charliebakerComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
I'm not really sure how I feel about this photo. The bottom half seems really bright, overly so actually, and the top looks morbidly dark, almost evil.
The more I look at it, the more it seems to me that it just doesn't work together. The beach is beautiful, really nice scene there. The mountain is fascinating, really nice with the fog...the the 2 together isn't cutting it as one image.
I wish I could clarify that more, since it's not really making much sense even to me, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say.
Focus and clarity are good. I like the waves in the water, but I think that the bottom being so bright kind of washes away some of the detail in the waves that I'd like to see. See how the edge of the water is just white? Would like to have seen a bit more of that I think.
Overall, some interesting parts that just don't seem to quite go together.
~Heather~