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by aelith

Comment by Kaz:
Excellent lighting.

classic
by aelith

Comment by clicker:
I would feel more comfortable with some sort of `center of attention` place to look at here. I`m not sure what the intent of the shot was, if any...

classic
by aelith

Comment by jsabbarton:
Clever, well taken shotâ€Â¦ The spooky atmosphere created by the dark background in this shot is great. The pencil looks a little like it doesn’t belong in the picture, but the way it’s balanced adds to the spookynessâ€Â¦ (9)

classic
by aelith

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

classic
by aelith

Comment by camelotnorth:
good compostion..great lighting

classic
by aelith

Comment by syamjonimi:
Good photo. i especially like the lighting and hope you will share this set up with us when the voting is over. The same set-up with different lighting and a different book might work well for the childhood challenge. =9 syamjonimi ;'-D

classic
by aelith

Comment by Kavey:
Pretty though a little too dark (I imagine it's deliberate). Too much black space at bottom for me, would have preferred more at top than bottom.
5, Kavey

classic
by aelith

Comment by CPattee:
The picture looks grainy

classic
by aelith

Comment by emorgan49:
unbalanced, the pencil is too high up. The legs of the desk just looks like stuff falling down, old desk, old book, new composition book?

classic
by aelith

Comment by HBunch:
Oh how I wish this were a bit more in focus, and a bit brighter. I am afraid that people (as I almost did) will miss the desk. I know, it's a pretty obvious thing, but if you're not looking for it, it could sneak out as a regular ol table. Also, the pencil could have been moved down a tiny tiny bit so that we would be viewing the pencil lead with the book as a background, so it didnt get lost in the darkness. I love the angle. wouldn't have changed that at all. Great shot and good luck in the challenge.