Story Time
by aelith

Comment by inspzil:
I guess I just don't see it....

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by bunnies:
nicely done

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by Swashbuckler:
Except for this being a little too dark, I really like this photo. Nice degree of business, w/o clutter. Nice background, too bad about the green wheat over the book, seems fuzzy, I think due to the beard (I know the focus is good, it's an illusion created by the beard of the wheat.) 9 Swash

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by justine:
Tad bit too dark....nice idea, creative work. Score 6 Kee

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by Kavey:
Interesting idea. A little dark overall. The dragon is blocking one of the musrhooms and because he is dark is blending a little into the darkness of the grass behind.

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by djbdj:
I like this shot. It's fun, and has an interesting composition. Well done.

Story Time
by aelith

Comment by lennier:
While this shot seems technically lacking (it seems a bit dark and dreary) I REALLY like the subject matter, and the "darkness" contributes to it. 8 -lennier

classic
by aelith

Comment by aelith:
Well, if anyone cares, this is way darker than what I worked on in psp7. In what I thought I submitted you can see the wall and the lower part of the old school room desk. Couldn't crop higher because then the window and glare would show.

oh, and this is the one that looks like a pencil point if you look at the thumbnail a certain way.

Thank you all for your diverse comments.

aelith

classic
by aelith

Comment by Kathyc:
Nice idea, color, composition. The angle, however, seems just a little too low. Otherwise, the arrangement is effective.

classic
by aelith

Comment by Froober:
love the mood and lighting in this photo. good composition too. Lisa