Lily Pomd
by frychikn

Comment by cghubbell:
This image is very busy to me. I'd suggest trying to find something you want to express from the scene and try to find ways of emphasizing it so that everything didn't get lost in the image.

Lily Pomd
by frychikn

Comment by willem:
not sure what you want to show here, too much going on. A choice of some large leaves, or a flower, a more concentrated image would have been more appealing.

Lily Pomd
by frychikn

Comment by Falc:
I know its not something you could do much about, but those tags are damn annoying

Lily Pomd
by frychikn

Comment by peete:
pond?

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by train:
Hello John from the Critique Club

I havent a clue what the title stands for but I do like the style of words you used (The font) it looks like text on a rock album

You have used too many objects with very different patterns and it makes me almost dizzy trying to look at it.
I like the two faces you have in your image and I think it would have helped if you focused on them with a plain background and left the other items out.
A plain background would also make your text stand out.

It seems unfair to vote you so low when you have obviously tried the colour is good ,but please try to remember that simple is sometimes better and there were a whole lot of excellent images in this challenge, and D P C have a very high standard
I hope that you will continue to enjoy your photography and have better luck in your future challenges
If you have any questions please feel free to P M me
Regards
Sally

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by Jacko:
Congrats on the brown ribbon.

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by GinaRothfels:
I find this too cluttered for my liking. You should rather have isolated some element of it - probably the dolls, which look really interesting.

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by pcody:
Not knowing what the words represent makes it hard to judge this picture. I am assuming that it's the bank clan? If that is it, the bank is to hard to find. The picture is to cluttered to have much of an impact.

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by peecee:
Very cluttered picture, too many items fighting for attention.

Deezuumeraa Piggybank Clanisaus
by frychikn

Comment by bongo:
I'm not getting the title.
Good effort. I like the font on the text as well