So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by melismatica:
It looks like you set this up in front of your dishwasher or some other big appliance. Not a great choice for a background. I don't understand the choice to show two boxes. The box on the left is just more business in an already busy composition. A single (REAL) flower, the suds, soap, and one box would have been much more effective. The swans and silk flower arrangement are just kind of cheesy looking. After viewing it for awhile, a finally get that the background I'm seeing is the bathroom tile and the lower edge of a mirror. I was seeing the mirror as a chrome handle on an appliance.

Next time, create a still-life on a table against a simple background (matte white paper or poster board) with only the product and one or two other items (like flowers, petals, etc.).

My Dream Collection
by timganier

Comment by Stagolee:
Well done, hope the kids got them back. 8

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by Node:
Really nice try. The bubbles are a bit over exposed and there are a few shadows. Maybe next time try to difuse the light a little and a little fill flash.

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by redmondson01:
Nice, a soap stil life...6

My Dream Collection
by timganier

Comment by kevinswope:
I usually dont like pictures of toys and such but this is very nicely done. 8

My Dream Collection
by timganier

Comment by photom:
Cute - looks real! Nice composition and placement. The white on the right side seems a bit hot.

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by debitipton:
What if you'd cropped to the soap, the box and the suds? The extra in the back distracts from your creativity of the product display.

My Dream Collection
by timganier

Comment by Curious:
I like the composition and the stark light. The bright foreground and soft background really push the subjects forward. I wonder if a wide depth of field would work better to give focus to all the cars.

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by Hye5:
Very nice! I can easily see this in a print ad!

So Fresh & So Clean
by timganier

Comment by pearcer:
Well thought out. lighting is superb, Great effort