Leaving for the cityby
PatrolComment by BMacD: Hi! Here̢۪s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Eyes drawn directly at the animals face, then up to the sign, over to the sky , the dark tree on the right and then back to the animal. Then the more practical question, was it running at you? Good thing you were looking up!
Composition:
Found the sign, sky and trees distracting. Given your subject, tighter cropping may have helped.
Subject:
No problem meeting the challenge. Animals expression is really good! I liked your title. It went with the expression.
Technical:
With no post editing comments, I don̢۪t know what you were trying to achieve. A little more contrast may have improved the flatness of the picture. I found the focus soft with nothing sharp. Given your comment, you may not have had time to keep your subject in focus!
Summary:
The subject and mood were stronger than the technical aspects of the picture.
Photographer found comment helpful.
