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04/04/2006 04:11:22 PM |
Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice Shot! The eye really draws your attention. Well titled.
Composition:
May have been a bit more effective if the face, “eye” was a little more to the left. Find the composition a little too centered.
Subject:
Met the challenge well!
Technical:
DOF a little shallow and focus a little soft. Lighting works well. File size is small. 33k, 600 X 476. May have benefited with a 640 dimension.
Suggestions:
More detail in the eyes, face and whiskers would have supported the mood of the picture
Summary:
Effective creative shot! Nice to see you moving your average up!
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03/28/2006 05:04:25 PM |
great image !
well executed
(pity though about the other eye not being entirely obscured) |
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03/25/2006 11:09:59 AM |
| a very fitting image for this challenge |
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03/25/2006 01:11:09 AM |
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03/24/2006 01:12:57 AM |
| nice photo. centering the subject and adding more contrast would've made it more powerful though, IMO. |
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03/22/2006 04:43:24 PM |
| the composition needs work. |
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03/22/2006 12:34:59 AM |
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