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| 05/11/2004 10:49:19 AM |
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| 05/11/2004 10:10:04 AM |
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| 05/11/2004 04:50:26 AM |
"Meet Daddy...."by PatrolComment by jjbeguin: Critique Clubber on assignment:
The pinwheel and the eolian generator, great idea, not only is there a spectacular difference of proportion in size and quality but also function wise: professional adult tool versus idle amusement for the younger. You chose to capture the size antagonism side of it only. Fair enough.
To improve this composition witch is either a little scanty or bare depending on how you look at it, I would start by off-centering the pole of the large contraption to either side and rethink the composition on these bases. If including more of the hillside in the frame rather than this uniform blue sky was possible, I would go for it.
Having a crisp, slightly more saturated, prominently positioned pinwheel in the foreground and one or several windmills (in or out of focus) in the distance would certainly be a good choice.
A kid and pinwheel running around in a windmill field, wouldn’t that make a great picture? Actually, I may do exactly that once. Thanks for the great idea.
All the best, JJ
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| 05/10/2004 10:30:45 PM |
Mount Everustby PatrolComment by autool: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 9
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 9
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 8.25 Dick
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| 05/10/2004 04:51:06 PM |
Mount Everustby PatrolComment by whagerbaumer: Great idea. I would like this much better if height were more emphasized by getting closer to the bottom of the pile. The clouds dimiinish the height by their size, so the less of them the better.
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| 05/10/2004 12:29:44 AM |
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| 05/09/2004 09:05:55 PM |
Mount Everustby PatrolComment by orussell: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
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| 05/08/2004 09:24:43 PM |
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| 05/08/2004 03:42:27 PM |
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| 05/08/2004 07:43:40 AM |
Mount Everustby PatrolComment by reevey: Great i dea, weather wasn't on your side tho! There's something about the clarity of the heap itself that seems a little odd to me but I can't put my finger on it. |
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