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| 10/31/2005 12:42:24 AM |
Three Pairby bobdaveantComment by JPR: I expected this to do better as well. such great light, colors, and most of all textures further enhanced by the grain. |
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| 10/31/2005 12:42:02 AM |
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| 10/31/2005 12:23:15 AM |
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| 10/31/2005 12:20:21 AM |
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| 10/30/2005 10:46:22 PM |
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| 10/30/2005 10:44:17 PM |
Three Pairby bobdaveantComment by rwouthuis: Nice colours. Good composition. I still rated this fairly high despite the fact that I don't feel the low level grain that was added helped out the end feeling of this shot. |
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| 10/30/2005 10:17:17 PM |
Mudby bobdaveantComment by Benbino: Great shot Bob. It made me laugh as soon as I saw it. He looks pretty resigned to the whole thing. Message edited by author 2005-10-30 22:17:54. |
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| 10/30/2005 09:53:30 PM |
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| 10/30/2005 08:47:11 PM |
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| 10/30/2005 06:46:34 PM |
Gateway to Clevelandby bobdaveantComment by bobdaveant: Originally posted by strangeghost:
Greetings from the Critique Club
by strangeghost
COMPOSITION
The composition is a little too cluttered. The blue bridge and its reflection in the water appear to be the subjects, but there is further construction in the background that appears superimposed behind it. All the boats and buildings on the left and right make for a confusing and busy scene. It certainly qualifies as wide angle with the great expanse of water in the foreground giving the picture a feel of great breadth. I love the bird at upper left. Very nice touch! Too bad the water's a bit dirty directly in front.
TECHNIQUE
Great sharpness, focus, contrast, nothing to complain about at all!
OVERALL IMPACT
While this is a technically excellent photo, it lacks that subjective punch needed to make the viewer stop and stare. I think it's tough for a photo of a busy scene to do that - there is no clear single subject to command attention and become the centerpiece of your pic, and no sense of drama or emotional draw.
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Thanks for one of the best critiques I hav ever had. Very insightfull and helpfull.
Bob |
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