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Comment by train:
Hello Patsy from the Critique Club

This is truly a balancing act.A great find. Well done for that!
Your placing in the challenge is also very good.
The only thing I think may have helped here, (in my opinion) is I wonder what this would look like in Black and white instead of the colour as that is what seems to be the problem with the D P C voters
It does look wierd around the sky level and the trees look almost too green
Maybe change to B/W and play around with the tonal range to give more dramatic effect. Although the image itself IS very dramatic

I dont think I can add much more to this A great image!
I hope my comments help if you have any questions you can P M me
Good luck in the challenges
Regards
Sally

Well Loved... Well Worn
by pmichaud

Comment by arngrimur:
These are definetly everyday objects. Composition is fine but i would like to see the floor and the line from the left side distracts me.

Well Loved... Well Worn
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Comment by Falc:
not sure that the thing in the background (left) really contributes to the composition, otherwise an ok, but lacking in WOW

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Comment by magnus:
Extraordinary subject, but the sky looks over-processed

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Comment by dinny:
colors seem a little off

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Comment by peecee:
Nice shot but the sky doesn't quite look right, burning ?

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Comment by Stagolee:
This is a graphic example of balance, the sky is a bit of a worry, beside that this image should finish high up.

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Comment by kosmikkreeper:
Now that's funny! :-) There's something odd about the colors though. The sky seems desaturated (grey and cloudy) yet the colors are quite bright.

Clear As ....
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Comment by L1:
Perfect for the challenge; cute idea! :o)

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Comment by caba:
Super find, well done.